At first, I love your stories, especially the Mr.William one, but this is close second. I have to say i have troubles with the end of this one. It isnt the end i would have liked, but anyway it was a good read and its your decision where you want to go. you made me cry over spike, well again :), its just so sad to imagine that hes now in limbo and if hes ever going to heaven buffy will have shared a life time with william, even loved him and perhaps forgotten spike by then? i just love a story that makes me cry :)
I've never been of the opinion that William and Spike represent separate entities, but I have always wanted to write a fic in which they were, and you've done a great job here. Spike made the right decision - William deserved his second chance at life. And, you know, woohoo! Deflowering!
I know that's what you say when you don't like someone's review. So I'm bracing myself for the shrugging and not caring. Sorry but I think this ending sucks... As much as I love William, he is a fundamental part of Spike... Yet Spike is William + Demon and the demon is also in love with Buffy and separating the two forever? And B. being satisfied without her little monster in her man, I beg to disagree... But you're the master on board your ship, the story overall was as usual perfectly written and apart from my dislike of the ending I'll say bring more Mr William on. Shippy
That's only my response when somebody is a giant prick. I've written lots of Spike/Buffy stories, and I'll write lots more. I wanted to write a Buffy/William story though...so I did. AFAIC, it couldn't have ended any other way---Spike wanted Buffy to life like a "normal" woman, and he wanted to give William a second chance. they're not ripped apart forever. Remember, Spike will tear apart heaven and hell to find her again. They'll be re-united in heaven permanently---how do I know? Because I'm the God of the Pepperverse, and I say so.
That was so sweet!! You can write the sweetest, most loving, beautiful sex scenes I have ever read but then again you can also do those amazing intense, kinky, naughty sex scenes. I love both!! Kinda sad that it ended but at least for me it was satisfying. Now get back to Mr. William please I need to know what happens, the cliffhanger is killing me. PS After e-mailing you I now feel worthy to post. ;) Alana
Get away from William, Buffy! I want him! Mine! Mine! Er, sorry, I lost my head there for a minute. See how well you bring these characters to life?
A sweet, sexy ending. I loved both William and Spike and hated to see one of them sacrificed, but I am glad that William got his second chance at life. Good job, Pepper!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png){kind=small}
redqueen6238.livejournal.com - (no subject)
From:
no subject
From:
no subject
From:
no subject
A plot with magic and true love and hard choices and good sex and some violence. I really enjoyed reading this.
From:
no subject
From:
Nice ending!
From: (Anonymous)
no subject
I have to say i have troubles with the end of this one. It isnt the end i would have liked, but anyway it was a good read and its your decision where you want to go.
you made me cry over spike, well again :), its just so sad to imagine that hes now in limbo and if hes ever going to heaven buffy will have shared a life time with william, even loved him and perhaps forgotten spike by then?
i just love a story that makes me cry :)
flame
From:
no subject
I've never been of the opinion that William and Spike represent separate entities, but I have always wanted to write a fic in which they were, and you've done a great job here. Spike made the right decision - William deserved his second chance at life. And, you know, woohoo! Deflowering!
From: (Anonymous)
Shrug, I don't care.
But you're the master on board your ship, the story overall was as usual perfectly written and apart from my dislike of the ending
I'll say bring more Mr William on.
Shippy
From:
Re: Shrug, I don't care.
I've written lots of Spike/Buffy stories, and I'll write lots more. I wanted to write a Buffy/William story though...so I did. AFAIC, it couldn't have ended any other way---Spike wanted Buffy to life like a "normal" woman, and he wanted to give William a second chance.
they're not ripped apart forever. Remember, Spike will tear apart heaven and hell to find her again. They'll be re-united in heaven permanently---how do I know? Because I'm the God of the Pepperverse, and I say so.
From: (Anonymous)
Re: Shrug, I don't care.
Shippy
From:
Re: Shrug, I don't care.
From: (Anonymous)
no subject
PS After e-mailing you I now feel worthy to post. ;) Alana
From:
no subject
A sweet, sexy ending. I loved both William and Spike and hated to see one of them sacrificed, but I am glad that William got his second chance at life. Good job, Pepper!